It was a dark non-rainy night
When Fred said hoi, hoi, hoi
Jane was a girl
But Fred was a boy, boy, boy
They had a dog
But they kept it chained up too long
And it went vicious
And somewhat malicious
Its food was delicious
Its name was Grishus
And it had big paws
That were atrocious
Well, one day it was looking at its food
When up from the ground
Came a bubbling crude
Black gold, Texas tea
Could I get this published?
When Fred said hoi, hoi, hoi
Jane was a girl
But Fred was a boy, boy, boy
They had a dog
But they kept it chained up too long
And it went vicious
And somewhat malicious
Its food was delicious
Its name was Grishus
And it had big paws
That were atrocious
Well, one day it was looking at its food
When up from the ground
Came a bubbling crude
Black gold, Texas tea
Could I get this published?
The words like boy boy boy, and 'non-rainy night' and that name Grishus just so it rhymes with delicious?
I mean I could go on and on. This poem is pathetic!
Note if you are 10, then its one of the best poems ever.
I'll try again when suitably rested. :/
its an art
so make it your own
atleast thats my opinion
but make it good..lol
-Aless
Also, where do you get poems published?
HERES MY POEM
i was once a city boy
hard at work but then i saw it
it was horrible
it was ugly
it was...a noob
can i get this published?
happy 4th of july
Quiet as a mouse
Then the fire alarm went
And he ran out the door
Fred in the garden
Giving his cat a pardon
For some murder it had
Committed back in '63
The killing of Jack Ruby
Solved by old Scooby
Where are you?
We got some work to do now.
Scooby dooby doo
Where are you?
We need some help from you now.
You'll have a yabba dabba doo time.
A dabba doo time.
You'll have a gay old time.
Gay rights groups protested about that one. What am I doing wrong now? :(
I have no clue how this even made it through moderation.