Last night I sucked on my gay friend's hot penis and the shoved my huge erected c*ck up his tight ass and shot sperm inside it. Is that means I'm gay????????????????
I must protest. If your going to come here and write about your little fantasies at least GET THE GOD DAMNED SPELLING CORRECT AND TRY FOR BETTER GRAMMAR!
I quote..."my gay friend's HOT penis" Wow...you're a pro porn writer I can tell.
I quote again...."and the shoved my huge erected". OH MY GOD! PLEASE!!! WTF is that supposed to mean??!!!! It should read "and shoved my huge, ERECT penis".
Also, "...and shot sperm inside it". Again, your ability as a porn writer is showing.
GET IT RIGHT!
Stop using the word "penis" when writing porn. IT JUST DOESN'T WORK!!!
Some suggestions.........
Cock...simple, yet effective.
Beast...implies great size without saying it
Hog....sounds dirty
Try being a bit more descriptive...like "throbbing cock" or "loving beast" or "sweet, perfect hog".
You get the idea.
If I am going to come here I DEMAND WELL WRITTEN FANTASIES!!!!
I quote..."my gay friend's HOT penis" Wow...you're a pro porn writer I can tell.
I quote again...."and the shoved my huge erected". OH MY GOD! PLEASE!!! WTF is that supposed to mean??!!!! It should read "and shoved my huge, ERECT penis".
Also, "...and shot sperm inside it". Again, your ability as a porn writer is showing.
GET IT RIGHT!
Stop using the word "penis" when writing porn. IT JUST DOESN'T WORK!!!
Some suggestions.........
Cock...simple, yet effective.
Beast...implies great size without saying it
Hog....sounds dirty
Try being a bit more descriptive...like "throbbing cock" or "loving beast" or "sweet, perfect hog".
You get the idea.
If I am going to come here I DEMAND WELL WRITTEN FANTASIES!!!!
That is all.
Class dismissded.