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Running, I can feel something urgent is looming in front of me. The passage is dull silver with a grey roof running above. My steps land quickly with a harsh surgical sound. “The mud... The mud... The mud...� I whisper to myself over & over under my breath. I can see something at the end. It’s a giant blue daisy & its spinning. It comes into view but doesn’t seem to get any closer? I frown & look closer at the passage sweeping my gaze around as I run along. Then, I stop. There are tiny patterns in the walls. I lean closer to take a look. They are perfect little shapes in the form of a daisy. Thousands & thousands of them! I drop to my knees & see that the floor too is also covered in these patterns. I climb to my feet as a slight gust wisps past me. The daisy is now spinning so fast it is just a blue circle with a black centre. Then, other colours start to come out of the blackness. Red, yellow, green & all sorts of other colours. The blue seems to be trying to push the other colours back into the black centre. The passage shudders & I unconsciously shy. I look up & everything just turns to silver dust & gets blown away by a sudden strong gust. I choke 7 cough on the fine silver as I breathe it in. I am now standing in a forest. The earth is red & warm. I have no shoes on. I crouch & grab a hand full & look at it, rubbing it between my fingers. “Her feet...� I mutter. The trees are dark brown & I can’t see up into their branches. Strangely, everything seems to get darker quickly the higher up I look. I cast my eyes forward & see before me… her. Long red hair tossed over her shoulder casually. Her eyes are downcast. She is wearing a silver slip & is sitting on a grossly large root growing from one of the larger trees. I take a step towards her then stop. Her feet are clean. They are the most beautiful feet I have ever seen. “You need to take me to that place,� She says. I catch a brief glimpse of her tiny pink tongue flickering out as she says this & I am aroused inside my heart. I feel like she can make me do anything. I walk over to her. & I pick her up into my arms. “Hurry!� she whispers. I begin to run but I don’t know where I’m going. “Make me safe! Please.� She says, once again her lips not moving; she speaks in my mind. I am desperate now nearly tripping & stumbling I am running so fast. I need to remember something! I need to know. “Her feet!� I shout. She clings to me tighter. Then I halt. I can feet my heart roaring like a steel furnace. I look down into her face. Then I look up. “The leaves are black. Her feet... mud.� I walk over to the base of one of the trees. There is a slam gathering of black leaves being gently rustled by the breeze. I tough them with my bare foot & they melt into a thick black... mud. “The mud was black.�
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Comments (28)
im sorry thats waay to long im to tired to read it, try making it shorter
nice! these dreams of yours obvioulsy have a meaning to it
this one was not a dream but i have been thinking bout the first one all days so i wrote this.
oh ok then, but really you should consider becoming a writer, i want to become a writer but i dont have the talent you have! great work.
Is there a site somewhere else you can post dreams?
I don't recall any mention of normality here.
Personally, I think if people are bored of reading after 5 words you should just give up.
Anybody can write in this style. The only way to become succesful is by having some good substance to write about. Just describing things in detail isn't talent. It's just describing.
since when do we post fairy tales on this site. this shit is gay and plus its way too fucking long!

you aren't norml!
Your writing is descriptive enough, but most people don't care for the "first person" writing style. Keep going though, and perhaps pick up magazines that publish first time writers in your area. Read the work they publish, and submit some of your own work in the style they seem to prefer. It is possible to get published, and at the very least, you may recieve some constructive criticism. Good luck!
I think it means you need to try to get Nattie to date you Shaka.
no, i have never been normal & am proud of it.

@ rog: wur..?
most of you fools dun reaslise THIS IS FLAGGD AS OFF TOPIC!

this is for a reason...
are you a writer? you seem to know alot about it.
Nattie has red hair, I don't know if she fits the rest of your description, but maybe you should look into it. She'll probably be pissed at me for even suggesting it though.
Nah. I only go for girls I can meet face 2 face.
yes
Seriously, nobody wants to read this stupid bullshit. Youre a dumb ugly fuck! Go stand in front of a bus you dirty mexican.
You post your shit stories, which are worse than this mind you, and you jump all over people when they object. Leave shaka alone.
i'm mexican? my moms musta been keeping secrets!
@: roger49
leave shaka alone, NO!

He's a fag
Beautiful. You are an artist. I would love to read more of this. . .
This is really well written, and even though there is no clear story the wording was... haunting. Imagine what you could do if it had meaning. It would be chilling and intelligent, instead of rambling niceness as it is now.
i have a chilling story i wrote @ work. but its quite intense & goosebumpie.
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Post it when its ready! :)
Nice use of visual imagery!
oompa loompa
what the fuck!!!?
way to long to read
boaring, not wasting my time reading gay 5hit you Jew
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