Black
Running, I can feel something urgent is looming in front of me. The passage is dull silver with a grey roof running above. My steps land quickly with a harsh surgical sound. “The mud... The mud... The mud...� I whisper to myself over & over under my breath. I can see something at the end. It’s a giant blue daisy & its spinning. It comes into view but doesn’t seem to get any closer? I frown & look closer at the passage sweeping my gaze around as I run along. Then, I stop. There are tiny patterns in the walls. I lean closer to take a look. They are perfect little shapes in the form of a daisy. Thousands & thousands of them! I drop to my knees & see that the floor too is also covered in these patterns. I climb to my feet as a slight gust wisps past me. The daisy is now spinning so fast it is just a blue circle with a black centre. Then, other colours start to come out of the blackness. Red, yellow, green & all sorts of other colours. The blue seems to be trying to push the other colours back into the black centre. The passage shudders & I unconsciously shy. I look up & everything just turns to silver dust & gets blown away by a sudden strong gust. I choke 7 cough on the fine silver as I breathe it in. I am now standing in a forest. The earth is red & warm. I have no shoes on. I crouch & grab a hand full & look at it, rubbing it between my fingers. “Her feet...� I mutter. The trees are dark brown & I can’t see up into their branches. Strangely, everything seems to get darker quickly the higher up I look. I cast my eyes forward & see before me… her. Long red hair tossed over her shoulder casually. Her eyes are downcast. She is wearing a silver slip & is sitting on a grossly large root growing from one of the larger trees. I take a step towards her then stop. Her feet are clean. They are the most beautiful feet I have ever seen. “You need to take me to that place,� She says. I catch a brief glimpse of her tiny pink tongue flickering out as she says this & I am aroused inside my heart. I feel like she can make me do anything. I walk over to her. & I pick her up into my arms. “Hurry!� she whispers. I begin to run but I don’t know where I’m going. “Make me safe! Please.� She says, once again her lips not moving; she speaks in my mind. I am desperate now nearly tripping & stumbling I am running so fast. I need to remember something! I need to know. “Her feet!� I shout. She clings to me tighter. Then I halt. I can feet my heart roaring like a steel furnace. I look down into her face. Then I look up. “The leaves are black. Her feet... mud.� I walk over to the base of one of the trees. There is a slam gathering of black leaves being gently rustled by the breeze. I tough them with my bare foot & they melt into a thick black... mud. “The mud was black.�
I don't recall any mention of normality here.
Personally, I think if people are bored of reading after 5 words you should just give up.
Anybody can write in this style. The only way to become succesful is by having some good substance to write about. Just describing things in detail isn't talent. It's just describing.
you aren't norml!
@ rog: wur..?
this is for a reason...
He's a fag