r r r r r r rite!

ummmm how long did it take you to come up with that.

Its not bad

Like 5 minutes...
I did one before but I wasn't logged in and it deleted the whole thing.

PLease keep your day job.

I don't have one...maybe that explains it. =p

Did you even read it? I never said I wanted to rap. And I never said I was good. I don't see you using anything you learned from English class yourself. So shutitbihotch.

ur fuckin shit, u mug u suck dick

Lol, your lyric is about diss people lol. Dude you gonna have lot of enemies later lol.

And some wigger get piss about rap that have slang english and Y'all need to stop that. Here reason why that rapper talk like slang 'cause u know rap is like talking about what have done in their life. You see most rapper joined in the gang, (in past life). In the gang, they wear same style clothes, talk slang, have tatto.

You see snoop dogg joined in CRIP gang and Crip gang have blue flag hang on left side, talk slang, murder, sell drugs, slang clothes, so they know that person is in crip gang. So when snoop dogg got out of crip gang, he started rap about his life talk slang just like crip gang, sometime u will see snoop dogg have blue flag on his behind left side on music video. So all rapper know clean english, they talk clean english when they at home or whenever they not on tv.

You see Slim shady talk like little slang english, knida like easy to understand cuz he wasn't in gang, he rap about his daughter or whatever

so wigger... stop say "Ohhh, go to english class bastard!" cuz really rapper knew how to talk proper, they speak slang english cuz that what they do in gang before...

if rapper didnt join gang before and talk slang then that stuipd

I'm sorry, what was that?

some people get piss off that some rappers speak slang english and they don't even know why that rappers speak slangs english and even they don't understand what rap is.

I'm not talking about you sovlover

Hip Hop Sucks, Rap is stupid, and your al a bunch of homos

Your a fucking faggot and anyone can rap
Rap isnt kewl its fucking crap
the lyrics are stupid and the rappers are lame
almost as fucked as your posting name
if you go on about rap again im gonna fucking end you
i hate all niggers and i hate all jews.

Hip-Hop doesn't suck you bigoted fuck but the rap at the beginning of this post is absolute crap.

Well, you're a complete asshole.
What goes around comes around. Bastard.
Oh, please stop judging me by this one post.
I was bored so I made a rap.
I'm not serious.
The title you see...who would take that seriously? Supposedly everyone on this website.

That was it?
B*llSh*t!
Just another punk that thinks he can ryhme
So shut up, step back, stand down, get in line
We gon' handle this like grown men, you won't win
You don't even feel comfortable in your own skin
Another suburban kid who's daddy bought him a mic
Making up stories all day so he can rap outta spite
I'm here to tell you one thing, before you get on your way
So quit gettin off to your R. Kelly CD I got somethin to say

Welcome to the ghetto, your now exposed
On the left we got plenty hookers overdosed
On the right are some niggas who'll make you comatose
So how does it feel, how does it taste?
Scared of the culture you try to embrace?

So go back to drawing board, start it up new
The death of hip-hip started with kids like you

...Did you read my last comment? It was a joke, hence the title.

I wasn't actually trying to diss, I just thought of that as I was typing

pretty shitty, u sound like a skinny white kid, noob.

fuck fuck fuck fuck
you you you you
fagot fagot fagot

Yeahhhhh, that shizzle Mc Fucking Hizzle was tight. :)

This a joke faggot.