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Disgrace!

The futility of your fundamentalism

so hopeless and meaningless

infinite spirit you were so sure of

your prayers trapped in dark void

as populace is reduced to mere fragments

you were so sure was given sanctuary

but who promised to give tinkers cuss?

the vacant and imponderable.

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  • Holzman_67
    1 year ago

    No, but on a subway wall they may be pseudo profound

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    • Giorgi
      1 year ago

      Jesus, success attempt does definitely come with its draw backs such as disappointment sucking donkey ass.

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      • Holzman_67
        1 year ago

        Keep going!

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  • treemanintx
    1 year ago

    reminds me of bob hope's mama

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  • ospry
    1 year ago

    Lyrics are interesting but it feels like there's no flow whatsoever

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  • Tommythecaty
    1 year ago

    Too dramatic.

    You also may not understand how to use words, which may be problematic for you in future.

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