Do u like my death metal lyrics?

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UUUURRAAGGGHH!!!
GUUUUURRGGGHHHHHHH!!!

Your dark abyss blasphemes
All the light in holy dreams
The mouths of nuns agape
At the sight of priests you rape
With your infernal flames aglow
Seeds of discord you will sow
Demon militia at large
Heaven's gate we will charge

UUUURRGGAAHHHH

Your Dark Unholiness
Flash me with your hard penis
Set flame to Yahweh's skies
And shoot your discharge in my eyes.
Grab my hair and fill my bum
With your fallen angel cum
The Antichrist I'll birth
To the sound of evil's mirth!

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  • allialli
    1 year ago

    I also would like his dark holiness to flash me with his hard penis.

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  • Holzman_67
    1 year ago

    There’s some flashes of brilliance in there and it does evoke the feel of a metal song, so well done. My advice with lyrics is to also read it aloud as you’re writing them because matching syllable counts in words line by line make a difference in how the whole thing flows and sounds. Timing. If you have to say lines faster to keep the same timing, then it’s off and will sound off. Keep going though you have talent!

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  • Meatballsandwich
    1 year ago

    Pretty good actually

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  • Somenormie
    1 year ago

    As someone who likes that subgenre it's great

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  • Rocknrolla81
    1 year ago

    Nice!

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  • Iambillythemenacetosociety
    1 year ago

    It's god awful.

    I think I'm going to start world war 3 after reading this.

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    • Anonymous Post Author
      1 year ago

      I will be sure to mine this war you're starting for lyrical inspiration.

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      • Iambillythemenacetosociety
        1 year ago

        Don't do that. We've seen enough.

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  • Anonnet
    1 year ago

    It's terrible, but I think death metal's supposed to sound that way, so maybe it's good. I don't know. Reminds me of Tenacious D.

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  • donteatstuffoffthesidewalk
    1 year ago

    needs more fluffy bunnies

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