Is it normal to hate the word orbs?
Self explanatory. The word 'orbs' used to describe a person's eyes in typical fan fiction is a serious bother to my reading experience and takes me completely out of the story.
Ex: Timmy got down on one knee and took the tiny box out of his pocket.
"Sarah, will you marry me?" he asked in a trembling voice.
"Yes!" she cried, staring into his bright green orbs.
No, it's a word you jerk. | 3 | |
I don't care. | 9 | |
Yes, I hate it too. | 8 |