My poem of positivity :)

I have seen a lot of hate on this site so I am here to make a poem about positivity to lift everyone's spirits and hopefully make some people think bout their actions.

Im priviliged and I know it
Im priviliged and I show it
Yeah Im white, is that wrong?
No, Im an ally with this song

Viva feminism
Viva trans rights
I will always stand up
I will always fight

I love black people
they are the best
Im sorry for what my ancestors did
it really makes me stress

This is powertothepeople singing this song
this is power to the people
bigotry is wrong
lets all stand up for non-binary rights
lets all stand up, Ill lead the fight

That's all. Thanks for reading guys and remember to be nice to one another. If you like my poem and think its cool then let me know and I might write another one :)

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  • Vvaas

    ur like the opposite of weirdguy u guys should fight for dominance

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  • Taiahishere2

    Yeah I just don’t see how we have to Apologize for what our ancestors did when we have nothing to do with it. It’s what they learned. And we learned the opposite, I grew up in almost an all black school being white with almost all black friends that I love dearly and in no way was I privileged at all either I don’t like how you said that. There’s black and white people who are privileged it’s only all about money now days not race.

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    • bbrown95

      Agreed. No one is responsible for the actions of their ancestors, nor should they pay the price for what they did. If an ancestor of mine robbed a bank, should I have to do the prison time for it? That is how ridiculous that line of thought is to me. I can guarantee EVERYONE has ancestors somewhere down the line that did something despicable. Just because someone shares DNA with someone who did something bad doesn't mean they support or believe in it.

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    • Wow3986

      I honestly don't get why people are even still talking about that.

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  • Tommythecaty

    There’s nothing positive about a politically minded poem.

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    • powertothepeople

      im just trying to bring people together and stop hate

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      • Tommythecaty

        Hate is as normal as love, no reason to stop it.

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  • megadriver

    This is the 2nd dumbest thing I've read on here and this site is no stranger to stupid posts. So well done there...

    Yes, white people are so evil, we need to be ashamed of ourselves.

    Our ancestors only invented electricity, the car, the airplane, printing press, jet engine, modern medicine, electromagnetic induction, vacuum cleaner, dishwasher, mouse trap, sunglasses, cans and can openers, sunglasses, toothbrush, refrigeration, space travel, steam engine, electric motor, threshing, steel casting, roller printing, universal time, radar, flushing toilet, DNA profiling, carbon fiber, ATMs, electric train, antibiotics, semi-trucks, buses, SUVs, rocketry, the microscope, the telephone, analog and electronic television, satellites, photography, pneumatic tires, robotics, bicycle, motorcycle, glasses, plastics, wireless technology, the computer, the internet (same internet you're using right now) and many, many more!

    You are welcome!

    Still white, still proud of my heritage, proud of my country's history, proud for serving my country, not confessing my sins to you, not gonna accept, or support feminism. Most people aren't privileged, they worked to get to where they are at, me included.

    "Privilege" is a word mostly used by people who can't make it in life to justify their failures and blame others for their own incompetence.

    Fastest way to make me hate something is to try and force it on me, or try shaming me for something I am not responsible for.

    PS: Real women don't need handicap points in life, they make it on their own! They follow their dreams and live the lives they want. Without feminism! Feminism is a tool used by people to try and justify their uselessness and ineptness in life by blaming the world around them.

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    • Tinybird

      what's the first stupidest?

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      • megadriver

        Anything written by hookerfall/ iin's angry lesbian XD

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  • 1WeirdGuy

    If I get rich Ill buy property off the INTERSTATE
    And then I'll CONGREGATE
    And it may INSTIGATE

    I will put up confederate STATUES.
    When u drive by Nathan Bedford Forrest staring AT YOU.

    And they will be on private property, ya SEE?
    Look at the legendary Robert E LEE
    Theyre there to welcome u to TENNESSEE
    Like I said its private PROPERTY

    And you cant do SHIT
    Even if you throw a FIT
    Look that statues so LEGIT.

    Not like YOURS.
    Im talkin bout GEORGE

    You put the George Floyd statue to REVOLT
    And God struck It down with a mutha fuckin lightning BOLT.

    Hehe if I could play the guitar id come up with some silly songs

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    • Somenormie

      heck yes.

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    • Clunk42

      This poem is considerably superior than the OP's, from a poetic standpoint. Neither have proper meter, though.

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      • 1WeirdGuy

        Its funny when you know George Floyds statue literally got struck by lightning 😂

        God dont even want that shit.

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        • Tinybird

          yeah and the only reason anyone cares is because he was black. I saw a video yesterday of a white guy getting tazered by police and set on fire and he died. But nobody will care about that, because he was WHITE.

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          • 1WeirdGuy

            Look up Tony Timpa. It was a white guy who died the same way with a knee on the neck. And he didnt even commit a crime he had mental problems and called the police himself because he was hearing voices. They tried to hide the body cam footage and told his family he dropped dead from a heart attack. It was 10x worse than George Floyd but he's white so BLM of course didnt care.

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  • Meowypowers

    Unmasked:
    Unmasked you see our future
    Unmasked you see our pain
    Unmasked you see our cries
    Unmasked you see our suture
    Unmasked you see our disdain
    Unmasked you see our lies
    Masked you see our silence

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  • Wow3986

    Wtf?

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    • Somenormie

      ikr

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  • Curiouskitten444

    Thanks for being a sweet human on this site. Few and far between .

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    • powertothepeople

      That was very ncie of you to say thank you.

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  • Cliche1234

    Non-binary right is one of the most retard thing to fight for.

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  • jethro

    Oh for goodness sakes. I am white and I am not nor have I ever been privileged. You're basically a troll.

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  • Tinybird

    Kinda cringe sorry but I appreciate the effort.

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  • olderdude-xx

    Interesting.... A good start as a poet.

    I like the positive slant (or at least the attempt at it).

    Keep working on writing poems... and you'll get better with time.

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    • powertothepeople

      Thank you for the positve words friend! :)

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  • Yaidin

    Hate ultimately eats at those who spew it. What you do with other oeople's hate is up to you

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  • Clunk42

    This poem is absolutely terrible. The rhymes are slant, the meter is inconsistent, and the message is trash.

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